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A_R
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Eingetragen auf 02-05-2011 09:45 |
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Greetings, I've uploaded some samples of my latest works, this is stuff created in different moments between 2009-2011
Take a listen if you like, all kind of feedback is welcome...
http://uden.bandcamp.com/album/advance-promo
www.uden.co.nr
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Doomcore
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Eingetragen auf 02-05-2011 11:28 |
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Cenizas, Vortice and Ruinas II sound really nice. I don't like Ondas Sin Origen, way too simple imo. Also Nada, needs some better compression technique, some parts of the track are way too quiet. Overall, good work. |
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DarkAmbient
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Eingetragen auf 02-05-2011 16:04 |
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Yes, Nada is pointless, you could have recorded silence instead -- even as an intro this doesn't make any sense and only challenges the patience of the listener. But Ondas is way to silent as well. The distortion is a bit unnerving, I'd opt for another kind of industrial element to make it 'dark ambientish'. If you want to keep Nada, I would put it at the end as a 'fade out'. That's at least my preferred ambient album structure: loud at first and with time and increasing trance state level (the ear becomes more sensible at some point) make it more silent. |
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A_R
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Eingetragen auf 02-05-2011 22:43 |
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thanks for your comments, i might take in consideration some views, specially about the first track, which I do like too keep, but as Doomcore said, work a little more in the compression, I think overall I mastered all the tracks to silent and I was exactly reconsidering that.
Sometimes is good to have some third person opinions.
Nice to have some insights
Cheers!
www.uden.co.nr
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